For this reading Diary post, I picked Rama’s Terrible
Discovery. It is a section in my reading that interested me the most for a
storytelling post. The story interests me because of the plot. It is a
interesting plot because I can find ways to write my own story to it. I like it
because Rama discoveries that Sita has been taken. He is freaking about what is
going on and now thinks his love has been killed. He runs up to his brother and
asks how he could of abandon her. It is an interesting story for me because I
can mix the plot up or change what happens at the end of the story. I do not
have to stick with the original plot. I can increase the dialogue or even just explain
a whole different type of story that interests me the most. In the story Sita
urges Laksman to go find Rama and that’s ultimately her flaw. She was taken
because of that move but I can change it in many different ways to make it more
interesting to me even though the story is very good so far. I would like to
stick to the plot and the setting of the story because I feel like that would
interest the readers of my story. What I think I could change to make it better
would be the ending of the story or how Sita was taken or whos fault it would
be that she was taken. I do want to keep Sita at beginning kidnapped. I have a
lot to think about.
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Krishna Dharma: Ramayana: India's Immortal Tale of Adventure, Love and Wisdom
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