Showing posts with label Week 11. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Week 11. Show all posts

Thursday, May 5, 2016

Storytelling for Week 11: The Army is Off

Hanuman begins to sail across the firmament feeling so overwhelmed with happiness. He has finally discovered where Sita is and does not know how to approach Rama with the great news. He thinks to himself how he must approach this in a calm manner because this is what Rama expected from him. He does not want to come off too excited to Rama because, even though he found Sita. It will be such a hard task to get her back because of how protected she is by the enemy. He has this great news he thinks he still will approach Rama very excited even though she is still captured. When Rama finds out where she is Hanuman believes that Rama has the power to destroy everyone to get his love back.

Hanuman says to himself, “ I think I will say something along the lines of, Rama, to no surprise I have found where Sita has been. She is still alive and I have been flying for many hours as long as I could just to tell you the great news.”

While Hanuman goes over what he is going to say, he is approaching Rama with the good news and finally has reached him. Of course, Hanuman is still filled with joy when he tells Rama.

Hanuman says, “ Rama, we have found her. We finally found Sita.”

Rama is in shock when he hears the news about Sita but he thinks "is she okay? Is there something wrong with her?"

Rama says, “ My friend, I cannot believe you have finally found her but why is my beloved Sita not with you?”

Hanuman has been so worried about what he is going to tell Rama that he forgets Ravana still has Sita at his palace.

Hanuman says, “ Rama, I was not able to get her because of the strength of Ravana’s army. You must go to your wife and bring everyone you have because Ravana is ready for a battle.”

Rama thinks to himself that he must gather the strongest men to create an army that will defeat Ravana. While the time passes, Rama finds his army and he sets off to defeat Ravana.

Rama tells his army, “ My fellow soldiers, we have set off to find Sita and destroy our long-time enemy. This will be the battle of the century for us. We must be brave and we will outlast our enemy. “

Rama closes in on the palace and the first to await him is Ravana and his men. Without any words the battle begins and for many hours there is a lot of blood shed and many good men that are lost but at the end of the battle there are only two left.

Rama says, “ I will spare your life if you give me what I came for, Sita.”

Ravana says,” I will not just give up that easy. You must get past me first.”


Rama and Ravana go at it and through the strength of both men the fight lasts a long time but in the end…….

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The battle

Author's Note: In the story of "The Army Sets Off" it begins with Hanuman setting off to tell Rama the good news about Sita. It deals with Ravana and Rama about to go to battle and that’s what I am going to focus on in my story. I am going to talk about a version that I think is more dealing with the beginning of this story. I am going to talk about how Rama and Ravana begin this battle and use dialogue that makes it more interesting to me. I am going to stick to the plot pretty close but add some details that I have imagined. I also have little interest in bringing in more characters because I think it will cause confusion on how I tell this story. I also started the story off exciting by telling the readers how Hanuman found Sita. The unfortunate part of the story is that Ravana and his men protect Sita and the hard part will be getting Sita. I also said in my story that Hanuman thinks Rama has the capabilities to get Sita back with his powers. This story is filled with excitement but it ends with curiosity and mystery. My story is a little bit different because the original story involves monkeys and bears but my story involves men. 


Bibliography: Ramayana: India's Immortal Tale of Adventure, Love and Wisdom,
Author: Krishna Dharma, 2008

Monday, April 11, 2016

Growth Mindset

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Pay attention!!
The growth mindset assignment was centered around the attention aspect of myself. I have noticed that I catch myself not paying enough attention in class sometimes, which is a bad habit. I have noticed when I am paying attention that things I am studying come easier to me which helps me make good grades. This challenge helped me focus on how important paying attention is for my success.

Tech Tip

For my tech tip I just added a weather gadget to my blog just to keep everyone updated.

Sunday, April 10, 2016

Week 11 Review

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I have completed the backup/checkup part of this review. To complete this blog I chose one of my favorite items of my blog. The link to that is here: Rama and The plan.

Monday, April 4, 2016

Week 11 Reading Diary: Rama's Terrible Discovery


For this reading Diary post, I picked Rama’s Terrible Discovery. It is a section in my reading that interested me the most for a storytelling post. The story interests me because of the plot. It is a interesting plot because I can find ways to write my own story to it. I like it because Rama discoveries that Sita has been taken. He is freaking about what is going on and now thinks his love has been killed. He runs up to his brother and asks how he could of abandon her. It is an interesting story for me because I can mix the plot up or change what happens at the end of the story. I do not have to stick with the original plot. I can increase the dialogue or even just explain a whole different type of story that interests me the most. In the story Sita urges Laksman to go find Rama and that’s ultimately her flaw. She was taken because of that move but I can change it in many different ways to make it more interesting to me even though the story is very good so far. I would like to stick to the plot and the setting of the story because I feel like that would interest the readers of my story. What I think I could change to make it better would be the ending of the story or how Sita was taken or whos fault it would be that she was taken. I do want to keep Sita at beginning kidnapped. I have a lot to think about.


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Rama's discovery

Krishna Dharma: Ramayana: India's Immortal Tale of Adventure, Love and Wisdom